Wednesday, December 2, 2009

MISERY of A boy


ANGUISH


There was one dream-

That was shattered.

There were tones of expectations-

That burst like bubbles.

There were so many fingers pointed-

That stabbed like knives.

The boy was dead and buried-

But none realized.


May be the boy aspired too far-

Aspirations that were beyond reach.

May be he never gave his best-

As he lagged way behind the rest.

May be he was good for nothing-

Only good enough to hide his own face.

The boy failed miserably-

But none noticed.


The boy wanted to rectify-

But was too far from the shore.

Every attempt to take a step forward-

Pushed him backward.

With no way out-

The boy ran away like a coward.

There were boats for rescue-

But the boy did not realize.


Was it really his dream?

Or mere expectations forced him to aim.

Was it his fear of lagging behind?

That forced him to oblige.

Was he letting his true love go by

To fulfill his “dream”

The storm robbed the boy of everything-

But the boy did not realize.


Struck by thunder-

Drowned in mid-sea-

The boy could have attained freedom-

Freedom from despair-

Freedom of thought-

Freedom to dream-

But the boy did not realize-

And none ever noticed….

12 comments:

Urchin said...

perfect...

Unknown said...

so good ..so true... feels like home!!!

Unknown said...

it is me

it is you

it is him

Preetha said...

Isn't this almost everyone's story? Very beautifully written.. A poignant post.. I guess the time gap in between 2 posts is worth it..

ICEMAN said...

I don't know whether it will bite anyone or not but it is definitely a hard reality in this era of ours.Excellent...

Unknown said...

It s d REALITY of life,it s d REALITY of d unavoidable ratrace,it s d REALITY for almost all of us.it reflects d common misery for u & me.....so ofcourse it bites.gud subject choice & nice composition.

anindyo said...

well written ... yhe boy is all of us ....... the times r thus

nupur said...

reality ..... nicely portrayed via poem ...

Shubhajit Saha said...

too good..definitely a hard reality.

dj said...

brilliantly written....harsh realities experienced by everyone.

Unknown said...

the hard core reality of every one of ours life...brilliant nd perfect..

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