FIRST DROP OF RAIN
The first drop of rain-
The first sight of relief-
Light amidst darkness-
Melody amidst thunder-
Mother Nature at its best
Beauty personified.
The first step,
On the wet grass-
The drop of water,
Trickling down the leaf-
Drenched birds,
On the branches-
The fragrance of moist ground-
Rejuvenates the fading hope.
As the paper boats disappear-
Carrying away all the distress-
Let the tears roll down ,
And flow away with rain-
Let us embrace a new beginning-
With our arms stretched.
As the sorrows are washed away-
Let the journey begin……
7 comments:
great .........great ............. bt i fail to find hope .. m a cynic ......... :-)
bt the hypocritical (which likes this poem even thou m a cynic ) ......part of me ... likd d composition ...
short n sweet .nice.
very nice...
very rhythmic...
gr8 composition....another diff type of poem written by u sir.carry on.....
Hmn.. sir has turned himself into nature poet.. But the message that you wanted to convey is fantastic and has an universal appeal which makes your poem even more fascinating..Also, I think that no matter what you are writing,you always bring out some social aspects through it which is very nice nd it makes u spl..
nice read..good job
so....ur poems r back...gud 2 have them back!!
gud 2 have ur poems back!!!
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