WAIT
Oh my beloved friend:
Why can’t you see my love for you?
Why can’t you see the pain in my eyes?
You might have disappeared like a fairy-
But your smile still makes me happy.
I still wait for you,
I truly love you.
Oh my first love:
I may never find someone like you-
I may never love anyone like I loved you-
Still we can never be together-
As you are gone forever.
But I still wait for you,
I truly love you.
Oh my love:
It still pains-
When I see you crying
It still hurts-
When we do not talk
I know you will never look back-
But I still wait for you.
Oh my lost love:
You may never know-
My love for you.
You may not remember-
The cherished moments we spent.
But I will cling on to them-
As I wait forever for you.
8 comments:
good one.. love is all we need
Nicely written.... I see you are developing a great flair for poetry.. and your emotions come out really well.. Keep up the good work.
Love is all about the emotions and feelings..
Whether they are realized..whether they are vented out or not..isn't important..
Well,they say that things which are good speaks for itself.So, I would not waste my time describing how good it is. It's obvious that the poem is good and those who have already gone through the poem must have realized that.I just really hope that your loved one comes back to you very soon cos even though reality bites but we can't afford to lose hope.
ahem ahem..an ode to love..good work...
mate,i dont know much abt ur personal life...but the way this is written,it can very well be one person or mor than one...either way,the demarcations make it all t5he more beautiful and alluring...loved the emotion in the sub headings
all i can say is that u've maintained the suspense u wanted 2.
one can actually say nothing after reading this.just the emotions are evident...nothing else!
onekdin por likhli....good one
I have lost my words after reading this....really awesome....
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